Good writing Laura. What makes it resonate for male or female readers is the manner in which you threw caution to the winds, ala a latter-day Walt Whitman, and spilled your innermost feelings out on the pages, not knowing in each of us you’ve touched a piece of our private humanity This is the stuff of memorable story telling be it prose or poetry, fact or fiction, narrative or dialogue .
(An aside: recognizing this is an August eleventh draft, I did see some construction and word choice issues you might want to consider. I’ll do that when I get back on my PC.)
Good writing Laura. What makes it resonate for male or female readers is the manner in which you threw caution to the winds, ala a latter-day Walt Whitman, and spilled your innermost feelings out on the pages, not knowing in each of us you’ve touched a piece of our private humanity This is the stuff of memorable story telling be it prose or poetry, fact or fiction, narrative or dialogue .
(An aside: recognizing this is an August eleventh draft, I did see some construction and word choice issues you might want to consider. I’ll do that when I get back on my PC.)